peer review

Kyle Struzs
Add more detail about the up coming PGA tour events and the next matches. So the reader gets an understanding of when to expect these events to occur.
Get another resource from someone. Maybe someone from the golf team.
The story does give a good sense of what is happening and goes into great detail about the golf tournaments.
I would like to hear more of when the future tournaments are.


Jason Higgins
Add more detail about what students and the unemployed can do to find a job like extra schooling.
Get a source with someone that has a job and ask them if it has been hard to hang onto their job.
The story gives a good scene but more detail about why people are having such a hard time finding a job.
I would like to hear more about ways students can increase their chances of finding a job.